Check my english please?

AAA Travel, with some 5000 accommodations with a business partnership and 1.9 million registered members, is one of the largest comprehensive travel planning websites in China, offering various kind of options such as travel planning, business an leasure.

* please tell me if there is anymistakes or advice, thanks!

AAA Travel with accomadation for 5000 and a business partnership, and 1.9 million registered members is one of the largest and most comprehensive travel planning websites in China. It offers various kinds of options such as travel planning, as well as business and leasure.

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AAA Travel is one of the largest comprehensive travel planning websites in China, with over 5000 accommodations with a business partnership and 1.9 million registered members. AAA Travel offers various kinds of options such as: travel, planning, business, and leisure.

It's a run-on sentence, it's too long.

You just mispelled "and" by putting "an" after "business".

Thats all.

Its terrible l2p grammar school